Wind in trees shake —
saffron and nutmeg crayons
‘Fall’ out of the box
Kigo phrase: wind in trees
In response to Colleen Chesebro’s TankaTuesday 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 51, 9/10/24, Part II: White Dew
Saffron – Haiku 2024 #TankaTuesday
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So (too) good, Suzette! ❤
~David
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Thank you, David! Happy Wednesday!
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So lovely my friend 🌹
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Thank you, my friend. And a great day to you! I love autumn season…yay!!
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Yay! 💕
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Beautiful 🌹
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Thank you, Satyam. Namaste! Blessings to you.
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Welcome dear friend 🌹🌹
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Brilliant – love this Suzette 💞
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Thank you, Suzanne! Have a lovely day! Cheers.
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What a fun description of fall. 🍂🍁
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Thank you, Maggie. I am glad you like it. Have a good one! Cheers.
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I love the double meaning on the word fall in this context, beautifully written poem.
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Thank you, Sweets! I appreciate your kind review of the word choices. Blessings to you!
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oooh oooh oooh, I love everything about this Suzette. Great play on words and visuals!!! 👏💓
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So delighted you enjoyed the haiku Cindy. Happy Wednesday bliss. Grace and peace to you!
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Love this Suzette!
Wonderful play on words 👏👏
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Thank you, Maggie! Blessings to you this day! Thank you for your generous support!
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My pleasure Suzette .
Thank you my friend!
Many blessings back to you.
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Thank you Maggie!
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Tremendous. 🤗
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Thank you, Selma. Happy Wednesday!
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saffron and nutmeg elixir
Love what your haiku achieved with this image. Capturing a quiet, creative ritual where the restless finds solace in the sensory richness of autumn spices and the act of drawing
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Yes, beautifully put! Solace in the sensory elixirs drawing in the mind to welcome change with pretty gifts as a bonus in the outdoor spaces.
Happy Wednesday bliss.
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Beautiful! 👏🤗💕✨
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So happy you enjoyed the share! Have a lovely day!
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Autumn is an artist’s friend, with its pretty gifts in the outdoor spaces and the soft strokes of sunset.
Thank you Poet. Wishing you a day filled with the golden warmth of Autumn’s hues.
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Thank you for the wonderful autumn wishes. I delight and wish the same graces abound in your Springtime day as well. Have a good one.
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You are most welcome Poet. Spring turned a tiny bit towards winter, still lovely weather. Thank you, I will. You too.
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Oh this is fabulous, Suzette. Thanks for writing poetry with me through the 24 Seasons of Japan! 🧡
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It was a pleasure Colleen. Thank you for all your dedication and hard work each week with the prompts and great information. Much appreciated and very inspiring. Blessings to you. Enjoy your break as you work on other projects. Tis a season of change
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Change is definitely in the air, my friend. Thanks so much. I look forward to the new challenges. It will be lots of fun! 🍁
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It does sound like fun. Thank you Colleen!
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So beautiful, Suzette, last line is superb. Fall is not far behind.
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Thank you Kaushal. Yes the seasons change is coming soon. Life is all about change….I think.
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You’re welcome, Suzette!
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Wow, fall out of the box? Wondering. Poetic juices.
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Thank you John for your generous comment. Much appreciated. Blessings to you!
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Love it, Suzette. “Fall out of the box” – beautiful!
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Thank you, Gwen. So delighted you like it. Happy Wednesday! Cheers.
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I like this, Suzette!
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I am glad, Keith. Thank you. Have a good one,
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What wonderful imagery! Loved it, Suzette.
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Thank you D. So nice to hear that you enjoyed the read. Have a lovely Friday!
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Love this “Fall” inspired haiku, the leaves 🍂 are so pretty 🍁
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Thank you Laura for noting the ‘fall’ reference(s). Have a lovely Sunday. Cheers!
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