Arbor – Haiku 2023 #TDWC #TGIF

Posted bySuzette BenjaminPosted inPoetry
Image credit: Susan Rushton

cloistered arbor

untangle cares vines

rest between two breaths

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In response to two challenges:

#TDWC – Thursday Doors Writing Challenge- hosted by Dan Antion, No Facilities

#TGIF– In response to Paula’s Light Motifs II- TGIF –

Image Credit: Susan Rushton

Published by Suzette Benjamin

Positive thinker, inspirational, writer, faith

40 thoughts on “Arbor – Haiku 2023 #TDWC #TGIF”

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  7. So peacefully the haiku unfolds
    Unravelling the strings of my heart

    “Comb your fingers through the roots to loosen the strands”

    Breathe in between
    Cloistered, relaxed,
    far from the maddening
    crowd
    Enjoying the day in my convent.

    Beautiful image
    Destresssing poetry.

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    1. I like the phrase “de-stressing” so very much what the end of the week one hopes brings.
      Your “combing” imagery is beyond exsquite.
      Thank you for the generosity of your discerning comments. So lovely to read and sense their height and breadth from your meditations with the poem
      Much respect!

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      1. Thank you Poet, yes this is how I meet my weekends these days. With utter abandonment I embrace the freedom and no routine that accompany my weekends. Today is an exceptionally relaxing day
        Yes, I’m happy you enjoyed the phrasing as well.
        You are most welcome, I enjoyed immersing myself in this haiku.

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