Relief – Haiku 2023

Suzette BenjaminJanuary 30, 2023January 29, 2023Poetry

parked home star

shiny coin in cosmic meter

relief sunrise

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34 thoughts on “Relief – Haiku 2023”

Sadje says:

January 30, 2023 at 8:10 am

Beautiful analogy Suzette.

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 11:21 am
  
  Thank you Sadje. Great peace to you this day my friend. Cheers.
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:33 am
    
    Most welcome my friend
    
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  2. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:47 am
    
    Bouquets!!
    
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  3. Sadje says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:51 am
    
    🌹🌹🌹
    
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klotylda says:

January 30, 2023 at 9:24 am

Beautiful metaphor, beautiful photo. Makes me nostalgic for yoga.

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1. abvr says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 10:11 am
  
  Yes you speak to the Poets heart.
  One can literally feel the exhalation in the chosen image and words a pure and honest expression of relief –
  
  Colour Book Kingdom
  Oer’Night travel, star rating –
  Golden Sunrise Balm
  
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  1. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:18 am
    
    Wow! A marvelous haiku! The color picture book imagery and balm thereof is exhilarating to imagine!!
    Thank you!
    
    Monday blessings!!
    
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  2. abvr says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:35 am
    
    Yes, the primary colours came to mind with the illumination of the Sunrise 🌅 orange when coining the colour book phrase.
    You are welcome Poet, Monday blessings to you.
    
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  3. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 11:48 am
    
    Excellent thoughts! Thank you!
    
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2. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 11:20 am
  
  So pleased you found good reflections in the pairing of poem and pic. Namaste!!
  
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KK says:

January 30, 2023 at 11:09 am

Wow! So beautiful, Suzette, both picture and haiku 👌👌

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 11:16 am
  
  Thank you Kaushal. Happy Monday!!
  
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  1. KK says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 7:11 pm
    
    Welcome, Suzette! Have a lovely week ahead 😊
    
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  2. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 7:17 pm
    
    Thank you Kaushal!!
    
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wjwingrove97 says:

January 30, 2023 at 11:33 am

❤️❤️❤️

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 11:48 am
  
  Thank you Jim. Monday blessings to you!!
  
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  1. wjwingrove97 says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 12:16 pm
    
    thanks
    
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GraceoftheSun says:

January 30, 2023 at 12:58 pm

Wonderful haiku, Suzette. Love this “shiny coin in cosmic meter”, such a vivid and unique thought. Amazing.💕

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 1:07 pm
  
  Thank you Grace. I like that line too!! Glad it resonated. Happy Monday!!
  
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  1. GraceoftheSun says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 1:12 pm
    
    My pleasure. It sure did. Happy Monday.💕
    
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  2. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 1:19 pm
    
    Thank you, Grace.
    
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  3. GraceoftheSun says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 2:36 pm
    
    My pleasure 💕
    
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d.a.simpsonwriter says:

January 30, 2023 at 7:53 pm

Beautiful 🧡✍

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 31, 2023 at 2:23 am
  
  Thank you! Happy Monday or Tuesday!
  
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  1. d.a.simpsonwriter says:
    
    January 31, 2023 at 8:00 pm
    
    You’re very welcome. It’s Tuesday here 😊 so I wish you a happy Tuesday or Wednesday maybe where you are ❤
    
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  2. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 31, 2023 at 8:08 pm
    
    Thank you. It’s Tuesday. Cheers. .
    
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Cindy Georgakas says:

January 30, 2023 at 8:46 pm

This one is so poignant and shimmers with truth Suzette. I love it! ❣️

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  January 31, 2023 at 2:22 am
  
  So pleased that you enjoyed the meditation of this one! Much appreciated.
  
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  1. Cindy Georgakas says:
    
    January 31, 2023 at 2:26 am
    
    It was beautiful Suzette! 💗
    
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  2. Suzette Benjamin says:
    
    January 31, 2023 at 2:27 am
    
    Thank you!
    
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  3. Cindy Georgakas says:
    
    January 31, 2023 at 2:36 am
    
    indeed!!! ❤️
    
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d.a.simpsonwriter says:

February 2, 2023 at 4:08 pm

Stunning metaphorical musings 🧡👏

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1. Suzette Benjamin says:
  
  February 2, 2023 at 4:09 pm
  
  Thank you! Happy Thursday! Blessings.
  
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