rhythm rhyme heartbeats
bleeding oxygen from veins
pulsing sympathy
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Rhythm – Senryū 2022 #WDYS 130
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rhythm rhyme heartbeats
bleeding oxygen from veins
pulsing sympathy
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perfect ❤️❤️
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Thank you, Jim. Blessings and peace to you. Cheers.
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You are doing well, my dear . I appreciate your choice of words.
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I am well, bu Hos grace. Thank you Eunice. Blessings to you. Have a great day.
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🙏🙏🥰
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Thank you!
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Steady DokiDoki
sound of a heartbeat
releasing slowly
in sweet
Symphony of Sympathy
Nicely followed through in with a wonderful Senyrū
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I have not heard the word “dokidoki” before. It is the perfect word for the heartbeat!! Awesome…
Your comments are a beautiful poem too!! Well said.
Thank you. Blessings be with you.
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I’m glad you enjoyed Poet.
DokiDoki is the Japanese word for heartbeat.
Thank you.
Blessings to you too.
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Thank you!
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Perfect poem Suzette. Thanks a lot for joining in
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A pleasure, My friend.
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😍🙏🏼
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(bouquets)
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Fabulous piece. Great take.💕
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Glad you enjoyed it Grace. My pleasure😊
Have a lovely day. Stay solid.
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I sure did. Have a great day too.💕
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Thank you, Grace.
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💕🙏💕
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I really like “pulsing sympathy.”
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Oh me too! Thank you. Sometimes, poetry just…writes itself!
Enjoy your day. Love and blessings to you Ashley Leia!
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Thank you! Hope you have a lovely day! 💕
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Thank you!
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I love this verse. We all need to exhale right now.
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Yes, exactly! Glad you liked it. Have a beautiful day!
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…and breath. Nice one, Suzette.
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Yes! Thank you Keith. Cheers
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Love these words. Thanks Anita
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My pleasure Anita. Have a great day!. Cheers.
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Intoxicatingly beautiful, Suzette. I love the idea of veins pulsing sympathy. Gorgeous.
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What a fabulous comment! Thank you Jeff. So delighted that you found treasure in the poem. Many blessings to you.
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You’re most welcome, Suzette. Always! Thank you, dear friend. Many blessings and peace to you.
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Thank you, my friend. Cheers.
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clever and skillful.
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❤
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Life blesses each of us with a unique collection of personal rhythms. Suzette, thanks for sharing your poetic gifts.
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Yes, it does. Amen to that! My pleasure. Have a blessed day. Cheers.
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