I am an ancient lioness before the world was new, hunting and gathering in the shadows of elephants in the Maasai Mara, clawing out a living to keep my children alive.
Living day-to-day in a cobblestone-like land, its bricks baked into an oven by an unrelenting sun that remembers the songs of dinosaurs— I dream. I dream of paradise, an Engedi Mountain warmed by Elysium breezes, as I pant to keep cool. Then, as I awake from midday slumber I see heatwaves growing a mirage of wildflowers blossoming hope.
A hope, I know to be true; that my descendants a thousand years hence will live in comfortable homes with cobble-stone paths no longer scratching out a living; where they shadow-play at hunting and gathering, practicing on a wildflower.
And yet still—an ancient lioness courses through their veins.
****The End****
I like this very much!
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Wonderful. I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you. Blessings to you.
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You’re welcome, Suzette.
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The thoughts and feelings of an ancient lion. I love it! Maggie
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Thank you Maggie. Glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. Cats are so amazing.!
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Excellent short work of fiction. I enjoyed reading this very much.
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Oh, I am glad you enjoyed it! Much blessings to you this day. Stay safe😊
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This is wonderful, Suzette! I can imagine that ancestral memory living on in the domestic cat.
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So glad you enjoyed it Chris! Yes, the domestic is so fascinating!
Blessings to you.🙂
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My little lioness, Luna would agree!
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Awww. So lovely to hear. 😊
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A look back at the ancient ancestors of the cat was so very uniquely imaginative. Thanks a lot Suzette for joining in
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Always a pleasure Sadje. Thank you for your wonderful prompts. Blessings.
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You’re welcome my dear friend
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(hearts)
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💖💛
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Can you believe
How this kitty dreamt
How she dreams
And here she is
Espousing a lived
Trajectory
Relentlessly upwards
Written by a great biographer
Who certainly knows her intimacies
And the intricacies of a
Kitty’s life endeavor
From wild to comfortably roar
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Wonderful comments all. Your analysis…sublime…”.a trajectory relentlessly upwards”
Thank you for your always careful reading and spot on observations.
Always a blessings to me
Thank you so much.
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You are most welcome
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.
I delight
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My pleasure indeed 😊
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An enjoyable read, Suzette. 🦁 😺
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So good to hear. I am happy that you enjoyed the read. Cheers.
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Cheers!
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Wow! This is awesome, Suzette. You write so elegantly. I love this take. Wonderful!
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I am glad to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Stay safe Jeff.
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You’re welcome, Suzette. Always. Thank you, you too.
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this is loveley Suzette
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Thank you Michnavs. Much appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
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I like where your mind took you. Such depth on the sweet image.
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it, and that it resonated. Blessings to you.😊
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I really like this. Would make a great children’s illustrated story or animation. Feels like a legend.
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Interesting point Rebecca, I received another comment to that effect. It never came to mind as I wrote it. But like all words they do take on a life of their own.😊
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Could be beautiful with feline watercolors and your finely woven words.
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That sounds wonderful! I will make a note for a future project.
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