
“… No matter the intent or heartfelt emotion, not all promises could be kept.”
― Sherrilyn Kenyon
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Haiku inspired by the above quote:
promises screeching
like iron on icy tracks
braking covenants
–Written for Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Promises – December 23, 2021
Nice visuals created by your words Suzette
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Ah, thank you Sadje. I credit the photo. I love trains😊
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You’re welcome!
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😊
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❤️
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That last line!!!
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😊 Glad you like it David.
Happy New Year 2022.
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I’m just wondering the context of the quote
But how this is life as explored through the haiku.
I love trains. Growing up, I always lived close to the railway line, well, in far walking distance. Back in the day they were the red brick ones before the metro came out with the friendly looking yellow. On my way to piano lessons I needed to cross a railway line. The better off lived on the otherside, so too our music teachers. Since I was weary about using the subway as a kid, I crossed with my kid sister at the turnstile. There was no revolving gate but that is the name we gave it. A dangerous spot, but from there we could here the screech of the train coming to a stop at the station.
At that noise we stopped dead our I think it always shook our brains a bit, just like broken promises.
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The context of the quote is the musings of a character on a quest in Sherrilyn Kenyon’s Dragonsbane, Dark Hunter Series
Yes, I si know what you mean and, your recollections bring back memories for me too.
I do love trains. For some reason wherever I have lived there were trains nearby or sounding their horns in the distance.
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Aah…thank you. I’m happy i asked the question.
Yes, are they not marvelous inventions. Back in the day we even had a tram.
Sadly the authorities in my country are not romantic about the illustrious history of railways and trains in my country. It’s in a mess.
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You are most welcome.
Oh, I am saddened to hear that. Railways have brought much to the land…not always perfect harmony…but a lot of good.
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Yes, it’s like a terrible movie in real time we see how the infrastructure is falling apart.
A lot of good indeed. Of course there are many stories about trains being held up…but it has supported the land, rural development and urbanization on a large scale.
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Yes, trains can help build infrastructures; but when things fall apart, so too could that same infrastructure.
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Oh absolutely
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Good night Suzette. There is still so much to read. Sleep well.
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Good night…or good afternoon… blessings.😊
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Yes it is late afternoon here. Im enjoying the retreat and the tranquility.
The potjie is on the fire, there is a feeling of returning home all around the place.
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Beautiful imagery. Enjoy the serenity.
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Thank you..
Comfortably numb, I am.
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😊
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Not all promises can be kept. This is a great thought. I love the picture and the poem.
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So glad to hear that you enjoyed the pair! Much appreciated. Have a lovely day. Thank you!
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True!
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Masterfully delivered, Suzette. Love it.
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Thank you dear friend. Much appreciated.
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Most welcome, Suzette. Always.
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