
A fictional short story series: Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6
It was the first day of autumn, and mystery cooled the morning air in the Adirondacks, in a dense fog.
Whynn was up all night peering into the ruby gem her team uncovered at the ancient site this past summer. She had to turn it in, to the Museum; but she convinced herself to hold on to it for just one more day.
Suddenly, there was a loud bang on the front door. “Who could be coming to call at four in the morning,” she wondered.
She threw her robe over her pajamas, and tip-toed on the cold tiles, down the steps to her front door.
She opened the door to greet the smiling visage of her coworker Meg.
“Heyyy Professor Whynn, we were all worried. You didn’t return to work yesterday. Everything okay?”
“What do you mean?” Whynn said, frowning.
“I was there: you were wearing your favorite ruby red shirt, Sheila from Human Resources, off on maternity leave, brought in her new baby boy to meet everyone. And, Charles in Anthropology, brought Krispy Kreme donuts. I was most certainly, at work yesterday. What are you talking about?”
Seemingly embarrassed, Meg made her apologies and walked slowly away into the thick fog.
The next morning at the exact same time, there was a bang on the door, this time more urgent. Whynn answered the door. It was Meg again. Her red coat damp with dew droplets from the heavy fog.
Almost out of breath, Meg uttered, “You remember all those things you told me which happened, the day before yesterday?”
“Yes—what about them?” Whynn asked, still holding the gem tightly in her palm behind her back.
“Well,” bubbled Meg, “They sort of happened, but not in the timeline you suggested.”
“First,” Meg continued as if making a closing argument in court, “Professor you were supposed to return to work two days ago. However, no one has seen you at work.
Second, how did you know about my ruby red shirt? My husband gave it to me for our anniversary three days ago. How did you know it was my favorite shirt, I told no one that it was.
Third, Sheila in HR just announced by email only yesterday, that she is expecting her first baby, a boy, in February next year.
And fourth, Charles, rest his soul, passed five years ago, before you were hired. He used to bring Krispy Kreme donuts on the first day of autumn every year to celebrate his birthday!”
“This does not make any sense,” Whynn interjected, wishing Megan a pleasant day as she closed the front door, as politely as she could.
Three days later, still holding the gem tightly in her palm, while shopping at Walmart, Whynn saw Meg.
“Hello Meg, how are you? Apologies for my rudeness the other day. I am sorry, I am not much of an early morning person.”
The woman wearing a ruby red shirt said, “I am not Meg, but something closer at hand, Whynn. Do you recognize me? You have been holding me in your palm for the past five days.”
**Part 2 Coming Next Week**
Well written and most intriguing. Can see this as a Twilight Zone episode.
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Yes! That was the inspiration, good catch!
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Interesting, where did the gem come from? How did she come by it and why did she hold it so tightly? 🤨
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All wonderfully good questions. Perhaps that’s another chapter to the story, who knows …
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You do, I can only hope to. 😉😁
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🙂
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I love the ending!🌟
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Glad you liked it Susan. My pleasure. Have a wonderful Thursday. Cheers
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All these characters and pronounced date is so fascinating.
Love how the story took a time travel character.
Going back into history is truly intriguing.
I love a ruby myself.
Did it eventually arrive at the museum.
The encounter at the supermarket is puzzling, but if she looked into the crystal ball she could go back in time?
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Fascinating questions. From the questions maybe, perhaps a next chapter on this story may be in order. Maybe…kinda sorta 🙂
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I think so
Not kinda
It should be
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Okay 🙂
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Great
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A pleasure.
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This can’t be the end – what’s next??? So mysterious and suspenseful in just a few lines!
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Glad you enjoyed the little short tale. Thank you for your support. Maybe more to come someday on this one…who knows?
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Oh wow! This is indeed an intriguing mystery. Great writing Suzette
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Glad you enjoyed it Sadje. Thank you, my friend. Blessings to you. (heart)
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You’re most welcome
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(bouquets of hearts)
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🌈🥰
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A really great poem full of mystery and suspense
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Thank you Julie, glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day.
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Your welcome and you have good day too!
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Thank you!
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Ah, the mysterious magic of red gem tales! I’m sure I read it yesterday?
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Perhaps you did! Time is so fluid in that tale. Who knows for sure, Goff
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Great story. Happy Writing.
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Thank you Goff. Your gracious support is much appreciated. And, Happy Writing to you!
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Cheers.
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Wow, this is a great twisting tale Suzette. So many unknowns and unanswered questions, which adds to the mystery. By not knowing everything, the reader almost feels a confusion that I feel Whynn must have been experiencing… Very clever.
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Yes, I like the way you express it. The scant information does add to the mystery and…to the puzzle. So glad you found it interesting. My pleasure. Cheer
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Yipes! This is a real Twilight Zone scene. So well written Suzette. I knew something was coming but not sure what and then BOOM!
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Ah, thank you Anne! So glad you noticed the genre, I was going for in the Twilight Zone. So happy you found it enjoyable. Thank you. Cheers 🙂
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The ending was surprising and unexpected. When sleeping tonight, I hope no one comes knocking on my door.
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Especially not at 4am. Cheers.
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Love this suzette! Great story! ❤
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Oh, my! I had to think twice to get the ending. How brilliantly intriguing! A very unique, mysterious tale. Loved it! 👌
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So happy to hear that you found the tale enjoyable! Thank you. Have a beautiful day. Cheers.
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