Abandon – A Senryū

12 thoughts on “Abandon – A Senryū”

1. Oooo
   They shudder
   I never thought the closet skeletons
   Would do that to you…

   Brrrrrrrr
   Shudder shiver
   Shakes shakes
   The emptiness sending shivers
   Down my spine

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   1. You echo the imagery with exuberance! Well said!

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      1. Yes 🙂

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2. Awesome! ❤ A lovely poem! Cheers! 🙂

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   1. Thank you Carol Anne! I am glad you like this one. Cheers. Have a good day.

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      1. Same to you Suzette cheers ❤️❤️❤️

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      2. Thank you!

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3. Great lines! A lovely poem, Suzette 👌👌

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   1. Glad you liked them Kaushal. Thank you. Have a great Thursday. Cheers

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      1. My pleasure, Suzette 😊

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4. These verses convey several meanings to me. Skeletons can be creepy, but not as cold as being outside in winter while the coat hangs in the closet.

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   1. Yes! You have captured the sentiment beautifully in your comment. Amazing. Thank you for your always excellent comments.

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