
Clinging to survival mode on the streets of life.
Those nights alone in the wasteland; a cold companion in neon lights,
Hugging despair in handfuls of Indigo shadows.
Floodwaters of anguish; rusted iron grills consuming fortunes’ fires,
Wading weary limbs, on repeat, clinging to quicksand in quagmires,
With nowhere to go but the homeless margins of population’s numbers.
Leaning on windows of missed opportunity; remorse’s blown glass,
Sleeping behind dumpsters by night, walking the streets by day, sores on her feet, no strength or might,
Once a fashionista, now only the clothes on her back,
Once owner of property; now, not a penny for a dry morsel to eat.
Destitution is an impoverished bedfellow but a wise counsellor,
Tutoring the student of the will; Yet, seeking no followers or fame,
Instructing on the difference between pricey and priceless.
Indeed, weeping may endure for more than one night; in fact,
Two endless weeks, as one long dark night in the looking glass.
Out of affliction’s ashes; compassion’s Phoenix soars, carrying a priceless lesson in her wings.
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Survival Mode – A Haiku
Compassion’s oasis
Embraces weary arms folding
In night’s cold desert
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Remarks:
Dear friend, as you may have surmised, this poem is wholly autobiographical.
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Written for Sadje’s What do you see #72
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Suzette, this is such a poignant poem, my friend. Amazing strength shown by learning lessons from destitution. Thanks for sharing your story through this fantastic poem.
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It is a pleasure. It was a long time ago. Time too added many more lessons from that experience. Many blessings to you thank you, my friendβ€β€
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You are an example to us all. Thanks
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Oh wow! You are most kind. I am deeply humbled my your thoughtful words. Blessings β€π₯°
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Well deserved, I think. Youβre welcome
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Wow, I feel humbled to have been allowed to look through this window into your life, Suzette. Two weeks must have been an eternity. How terrible.
Yours,
David
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Thank you David for your always kind support. It was many many years ago. And, many lessons learned, even looking back on it. Challenge and loss have a way of shaping ourselves. Amen. Peace to you, Davidπ
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So beautifully evocative
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Thank you my friend for your wonderful comment. Peace to youπ
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My pleasure
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Stunning poem. Brilliant carving. Inspiring.
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Thank you Kritika. I am pleased that it brings inspiration. I am humbled by your words. Peace to youβ€β€
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The rise after the fall can only be possible if one has a warrior heart. (my thinking) You are a warrior. I admire your efforts. (Hearts)
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Oh wow, you are most kind. Thank you for your words of support. I am humbled by your assessment. Blessings and peace to you, Kritika β€ππ
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My pleasure π π
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What a tough thing to go through. A good reminder to be thankful for what we have.
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I could not agree more. Thank you Liz for your kind support. I appreciate it very much. Happy Thursday! Cheers ππ
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Suzette, every word is so vivid. Thank you for sharing this poem with us, it is so very powerful. π
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My pleasure. I am glad you enjoyed it. Many blessings to youβ€
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This is so powerful, and a profound reminder to be grateful for what we have. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you Ashley Leia. And yes, I agree… we are blessed with much. Blessings to you. Happy Thursday!!ππ
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Happy Thursday! ππΌ
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Thank youππ
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I can so relate to this. Time moved on, things changed but the experience of it remains. You expressed it eloquently, no one is exempt from circumstances beyond their control. Blessings. ππΌπ»
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I love your comment/point that “no one is exempt from circumstances beyond their control” Very well said and absolutely true. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings on your day. Cheers. ππ
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Cheers indeed. π»π
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Phenomenal poem.
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Thank you very much.β€
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Suzette, your experiences share so much from this view from the city streets. If we aren’t moved by this poem, we need to read it over and over. God’s peace to you!
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your support and kind words. God’s peace to you also.π
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Both brave and inspiring, Suzette. I particularly like the phrase: ‘Leaning on windows of missed opportunity…’
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Thank you Chris! Sometimes we just do what we have to to make it to the next day. Blessings and joy to you. Peace β€
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wonderful work as always !!
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Thank you, my friend. Blessings on your day.π
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