
What if:
A crooked house, straight,
Upside down is right side up,
The unseen is the real reality,
The narrow road, a boulevard,
Surrender, the real victory flag
Plugged-in, truth unplugged,
Arrived, a stop along the way,
Thirst hunger, hunger thirst.
The high road, the low road climbing
Wading life’s waters is not sinking;
But the real ‘walking on water‘
And, taking a stand, is integrity seated.
What if
Time, is not linear.
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Written for Sadje’s What Do You See 70
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And to you. ๐๐ค
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Thank you for your gracious support, David. Peace to you.๐
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Wonderful ideas and speculative thoughts. Thanks for this thought provoking poem.
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A pleasure. Thank you Sadje for your always challenging and inspiring prompts. Cheers.๐
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Thought-provoking, Suzette! I particularly like those last few lines… time is certainly a conundrum.
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Thank you Chris. Yes, time remembered takes interesting shapes in memory. Glad it resonated. Happy Thursday. Cheers โ
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The ending made me to think. Wow fabulous read.
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Thank you Kritika for your kind words. Glad the poem resonated. Blessings on your thoughts. Cheers โ
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My pleasure ๐ Cheers!
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Beautiful lines!!
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Thank you very much. Cheers
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Really enjoyed your approach, beautifully done.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words. ๐
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Very nice job. Sometimes it does feel that time is not linear. Deep thoughts.
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Thank you. And yes, time seems to move in mysterious ways. Blessings to you. Stay safe.๐ธ
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What a fascinating take on it!
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Thank you, my imagination is usually way way, outside the norm๐ Cheers
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Have a wonderful day! ๐
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Thank you. And to you as well.โค
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I learned from another blogger who responded to the prompt that the photo is of an art exhibit in Boston, which is an hour and a half from where I live!
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Oh how awesome! A small world isn’t it. Great information to know to. Thank you. Have a great evening, Liz๐
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Yes, it is!
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Love this, food for thought.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your kind comments. Peace๐
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Youโre welcome. โฎ๏ธ
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