
As the vision continued, there was,
Festooning Paradise’s Elysian walls,
A breastplate of the twelve jewels –
Earth’s sacred ephod in gemstones;
Pillars of an eternal foundation
Not fashioned by human hands.
Then, Paradise’s doors opened,
Draped in Shangri-La’s diamonds.
Into that vision of Tsyion (Zion),
Galloped the steeds of the four horsemen –
Their saddles in crimson, flutter
To the sound of hooves of thunder,
Like the voice of the Zambezi River,
Over Mosi-oa-Tunya –
“The Smoke that Thunders,”
Over, Victoria Falls.
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Virtuous! A big shadow of truth!๐บ๐๐๐ซ๐โ๏ธ
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Amen. Love your word “shadow”. That is the perfect word!. Thank you for your kindness. Many blessings to you. Stay safe. Cheers โค๐๐๐๐ผโ
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I love how you make use of differing mythologies, Suzette ๐
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Thank you David. Pleased you enjoyed the poem and for noting the mythological nuances. Cheers๐๐๐
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Suzette, this is just beautiful
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So pleased you liked it Sadje. I appreciate your gracious support. Happy Tuesday. Peace to you.๐ผโค
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Thanks ๐
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I love it! Once again you’ve captured the mood of the times very well and woven it into a poem. The Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse — let’s remember that word means Revelation, to reveal… well done.
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Oh wow! I am glad you liked it. And your kind appreciation. Yes, you speak truth – Revelation means “to reveal.” Blessings and peace. Thank you๐
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โShangri-las diamondsโ ๐ค๐ง โ we r on the same page here :))
Beautiful writing โ๏ธ!!
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Thank you! So happy to hear you enjoyed it. I love your site.๐โคโ
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Yes, well done on that piece! & thank you! ๐๐ค
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Pleasure โค๐
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I hadn’t heard the local name of it before. The Smoke That Thunders is far more interesting a name than Victoria Falls.
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Yes, I agree. Easy from the local name to imagine the power from the world’s largest sheet of falling water. Peace like a river to your day, Ashley Leia. โค
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Thank you, and I wish the same for you. โฎ๏ธ
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Thank youโค๐
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