Ocean Jewels – Two Versions – Of A Poem

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Version A

Ocean crown jewels; magic afloat in coral

Where mere sand is turned to pearls –

Nature’s alchemy hides fortune’s token

In famous pearls like Beauty of Ocean.

Waves sway in the sea’s charm bracelet

Swelling as their currents spin amulets.

Version B

Ocean crown jewels;

The sound of the waves

Summons all the brave,

To traverse new lands,

To imagine new shores,

To safeguard its treasures:

Priceless pearls of water,

Heirlooms of life’s aquifer.

Published by Suzette Benjamin

Positive thinker, inspirational, writer, faith

28 thoughts on “Ocean Jewels – Two Versions – Of A Poem

  1. The two versions dance before me as distinctly different stages of life
    Considering both, for me it feels safe to say I’m at stage A.
    Standing on the shore gazing into the majestic beauty you describe, into magnificence of life, loving the ripples that gently come and ornate my toes, thankful to life, for life.

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      1. Wishing you a glorious Sunday too Suzetteโค, Thank you for your appreciation and thank you for sharing your intimate appreciation of life through these beautiful two tales of life.

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    1. Thank you Jane. Yes you are right on both points. Each version has a different “feel”. I am glad they offered some food for thought. Many blessings on your day. โค๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Your discernment is amazing. You are spot on in your impressions of the second piece! I agree – the writer mounts many adventures for all to enjoy. Thank you for your support and wise comments. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessings on your day. Peace

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    1. Hello Cindy Happy Sunday to you also. I loved your expression …”got swept away with the 2nd one” So lovely to hear, thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings and peace to you.๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜Š

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