
Carried on primordial oars
From where all living arose,
The ocean; terra’s watery veil,
Protecting all life in each swell.
Was first witness in the beginning,
As all creatures became the living
On that day, Oceans tide itself a tether,
Agreeing to move inland no further,
Becoming forever, the earth’s mirror,
Its watery veil and parabolic protector.
Brilliant poem, thank you
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Thank you for your kind words. I am happy that you enjoyed the poem. Rich blessings to you. May you enjoy the fruits of this day. Cheers 😊
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Wow what a lovely message, thank you sweetie.
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Very beautifully written poem
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So glad you enjoyed it Sadje. Thank you ever so much. Happy Sunday. Blessings and peace❤❤😊
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You’re welcome 😉
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💖💖🙏😊
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(Carried on primordial oars)
Powerful, these hands were first there to stir the primordial soup.
For the greatest timeless and poet of all time, creator of all things, only he has the reasons why he has endowed you with such richly textured metaphors and out of this world figures of speech and figurative language. It truly is fascinating to wonder about the process and to see how you ornate philosophy and spirituality so beautifully.
We are blessed to have you in our midst.
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Oh my, dear friend you are right, Creator is the giver of gifts. And knows how words touch our being. Thank you for your kind words …very humbling indeed. May you enjoy great peace always. Blessings ❤❤
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Wonderful!
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Thank you Paula. Have a beautiful day💖
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Profound and beautiful! You are a wonderful poet, Suzette! ❤️
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Oh, you are most kind and I appreciate your wonderful words of support. I really am grateful. So glad you enjoyed it, Susan. Blessings. 💖🙏
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A splendid poem.
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Thank you. I appreciate you kind support. Blessings. Stay safe.😊
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Hi!
L’océan, protecteur de toute vie sur Terre !
Quelle belle idée !
L’eau, source de vie dans sa générosité !
Gardien de nos modes de vie mais qui peut , à tout moment, nous la retirer!
J’aime cette pensée qui nous dit : ” N’oubliez pas la puissance de la nature!”.
😉
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Oui, Dunelinette, vos paroles … très bien dites. Les océans protègent la vie et tous deux sont fragiles. Bonne journée. Bénédictions
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Tes poèmes sont d’actualité. Ils parlent de thèmes universels qui nous touchent tous. 🙂
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Magnifique!!! … agreeing to move inland no further … Another masterpiece!!!!
Tres bien!
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Thank you Pene. Love the French in your comments. Merci! Blessings to you my friend. Stay safe
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