
Clip clapping in flip flops on coals for pavement,
Where heat waves hatch briquettes for cement.
Fainting ice cream bars unsuccessfully seek shade,
Behind once chilled tongue twisting lemonade.
Barbecued scotch bonnets in pickle produce,
Sticks of dynamite masquerading as hot sauce.
Rear-view memories, luxurious sauna to the bone,
Tropical heat and heart warming coals at every turn.
Love the words ‘Rear-view memories’. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you Goff! Thank you for your kind words. I truly appreciate them. Happy Friday. Cheers.
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Cheers. Beautiful Read.
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Those caught my attention as well.
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Thank you Liz, you are most kind. Pleasant day to you. Peace. π
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You’re welcome, Suzanne. It’s been a very pleasant day.
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Great line!
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Thank you Goff and Liz.
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Cheers, Suzette. Happy Day.
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Happy Sunday to you Goff
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Cheers.
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Yes, it is!
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Cheers. Happy Writing. Happy Day.
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Happy Writing to you, too, Goff!
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Cheers.
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Are you having a heat wave over there Suzette? I love this. It’s all faint-worthy, but my favourite line: “Barbecued scotch bonnets in pickle produce,” oh my, that is just so hilarious divine. π€©π
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Hello Lia, a “heatwave” in the imagination, yes. Glad you enjoyed it. I love that you found it “faint-worthy” Lol. Have a wonderful heartwarming day. Cheers.π€£πΆππ¦
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πππ Those emojis!!! πππππ
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Hi!
Barbecue, lemonade…Tous ces mots me renvoient Γ des journΓ©es sur la plage, en famille et avec des amis…
Que de doux souvenirs!
Merci pour ce joli poème.
Have a nice day. Be safe.
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You are most welcome. Blessings on your day. Cheers
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Cheers
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My immediate thought was, Oh, those flip-flops are going to melt!
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Oh Lol, melting flip flops, so funny. That would be a bit too hotπ₯even for me. Thanks Liz for the comment and visit. I do appreciate it. Cheers. Happy weekend.
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π Happy weekend to you, too, Suzanne.
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Cheers very emotion
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Thank you so much!
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I can relate, it is HOT in the south. Beautiful and appropriate lines.
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All the very coolest best Pene, in the shade. Blessingsππ
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